tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5929885462293344093.post5938179465341129596..comments2024-03-22T13:08:07.977-07:00Comments on Margo Kelly: Query Magic (or skill?)Margo Kellyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13474612650116392270noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5929885462293344093.post-19609947969066247292011-03-16T04:42:11.184-07:002011-03-16T04:42:11.184-07:00Yes, I liked the after also. It seems that it gets...Yes, I liked the after also. It seems that it gets to the point quicker, with less background info. It also has a better ending.Suzannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14698067676022598868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5929885462293344093.post-78127165753037867192010-09-22T10:49:48.859-07:002010-09-22T10:49:48.859-07:00T C - Thank you for your comment!T C - Thank you for your comment!Margo Kellyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13474612650116392270noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5929885462293344093.post-77617053691125262842010-09-18T09:38:10.335-07:002010-09-18T09:38:10.335-07:00Hi Margo, I read your before and after query lette...Hi Margo, I read your before and after query letter and I loved the after. I did see where you could remove the word "and" before the "then" in the first paragraph..."and then finds out". I found a great post on this at http://queryshark.blogspot.com/2010/05/159.html<br />Thought you would find this helpful, I sure did and you'd be surprised how much it cleans up your MS after you do this. Good luck with your endeavors and keep me posted.<br />T C MckeeAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08798243128846248604noreply@blogger.com