Showing posts with label Ray Rhamey. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Ray Rhamey. Show all posts

Thursday, May 11, 2017

CRAFT: Infusing Tension into Your Writing

This weekend I will be teaching a class about "tension" at the Storymakers Conference in Utah, and I wanted to share with you some of my favorite quotes on the topic.

Of course, story conflict begins with your overarching idea, but to keep readers turning pages, you must infuse tension into every scene. This does not mean inserting fist fights; it means embedding opposing goals, emotions, and ideals. When you steep a scene with contrasting elements, the crafted tension keeps the reader engaged in the story. 

You might think, “I don’t write thrillers. Therefore, I don’t need to worry about tension in every scene.” Wrong! This concept applies to all great writing – both fiction and narrative non-fiction.

"It’s your writing craft that empowers your storytelling to sink its fingers into readers’ imaginations and compel them to want to know what happens next." -- Ray Rhamey, Mastering the Craft of Compelling Storytelling

"Tension is achieved when you have a goal, emotion, or ideal working in conflict." -- Margo Kelly

"The more intensely characters want something, and the more intense the resistance, the greater the conflict. And conflict is the most important ingredient for getting your audience to dream the fictive dream. At all times, you should have a motivated character overcoming obstacles in pursuit of a goal." -- James Frey, How to Write a Damn Good Thriller

"Micro-tension is that sense that, on every page of the novel, there’s conflict in the air, or that characters are slightly off-balance. It needn’t be a flat-out argument or a gun battle or a huge confrontation. …But small and continuous doses of tension keep the story moving and keep the pages turning." -- Tess Gerritsen


If you'd like me to speak with your group on this topic, send me an email at margokelly1 @ outlook . com (without the spaces).

Happy writing!



Monday, April 20, 2015

The Best #Bloggers = Quill & Quotes

... Featured for today's #AtoZChallenge - @RayRhamey & Writing Quotes ...  
   


Over the years I've learned so much, made so many friends, and been uplifted by so many great bloggers! As a result, I'm recognizing some of the best bloggers for this year's A to Z Challenge. These bloggers have shared knowledge, promotions, jokes, guidance, support, and more. Scroll on down to meet the next set of bloggers.

To the BEST BLOGGERS in the world - I say, "Thank you!"


is for Flogging the Quill and Writing Quotes.


Ray Rhamey's Flogging the Quill blog has ALWAYS been one of my favorites. If you're looking to improve your writing, especially the beginning of your story, you must check out this site! In addition to a twelve-step checklist, Ray offers daily critiques (floggings) of writers' first pages. Ray says it's essential that the first page "begins connecting the reader with the protagonist ... and raises a story question."



If you need some quick daily inspiration to put a spark into your writing, check out Writing Quotes. Recently they featured this great quote by Lettie Prell: "I must write now and quickly, before I begin to prefer the perfect version that lives in my head." 



Please take two minutes to stop by these two awesome blogs and thank them for all they contribute to the blogosphere!

Friday, December 19, 2014

#Book Review: Mastering the Craft of Compelling Storytelling

SO MUCH GREAT ADVICE! I highly recommend.

 
 

My rating: 4 of 5 stars


I've read a lot of books on the craft of writing, and I've come to judge these books based on how many passages I've highlighted or bookmarked. And man ... I marked up this book! I've been a fan of Ray Rhamey's for a long time (especially his Flogging The Quill website), and I was excited to read this book to learn more from him.

What I loved:
1. This book contains SO MUCH great advice - from big ideas of storytelling down to little facets of word choice.
2. His writing style is very easy to read.
3. He's included practical tips and exercises for the reader to put into immediate practice.

What I disliked:
1. Sometimes Ray criticized himself when he gave actual writing examples. While some people may see this as humility, I felt it undermined his authority as an expert in the field.
2. Much of the book's beginning chapters read like a laundry list of Ray's personal writing pet peeves.
3. I read the Kindle version, and many of the pictures were hard to see. When I clicked on them they were blurry.

The list of things I loved FAR outweighed the list of things I disliked. Not only would I recommend this book to all of my writing friends, I will also read this book again and again to master the concepts presented within its pages.

[Note: I received a copy of this book for free from the author in exchange for an honest review.]



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Monday, April 7, 2014

F is for Flogging the Quill

 

So … you want to be a writer? Where do you start? How do you get there? No worries. This month I’ll be sharing my A to Z list of writer’s resources: books, blogs, and beyond! Check back each day to find helpful resources for improving your writing and navigating your way through the publishing industry.


F is for Flogging the Quill

How important is the first page of your manuscript? How many times have you read the first page of someone else's story and made a gut decision about whether or not to buy the book and keep reading? That first page is ESSENTIAL. But how do you make it great?

Flogging the Quill is an excellent website where Ray Rhamey posts the first page of a writer's manuscript and critiques it, but that's not all, the visitors to the site also critique the writing by voting yes or no about whether or not they'd turn the page and by leaving comments on the post. A writer can learn essential story writing techniques by not only visiting this blog but also by participating in the critiquing of other people's writing.

Do you have the nerve to submit your first page for public flogging?