Showing posts with label conflict. Show all posts
Showing posts with label conflict. Show all posts

Thursday, May 11, 2017

CRAFT: Infusing Tension into Your Writing

This weekend I will be teaching a class about "tension" at the Storymakers Conference in Utah, and I wanted to share with you some of my favorite quotes on the topic.

Of course, story conflict begins with your overarching idea, but to keep readers turning pages, you must infuse tension into every scene. This does not mean inserting fist fights; it means embedding opposing goals, emotions, and ideals. When you steep a scene with contrasting elements, the crafted tension keeps the reader engaged in the story. 

You might think, “I don’t write thrillers. Therefore, I don’t need to worry about tension in every scene.” Wrong! This concept applies to all great writing – both fiction and narrative non-fiction.

"It’s your writing craft that empowers your storytelling to sink its fingers into readers’ imaginations and compel them to want to know what happens next." -- Ray Rhamey, Mastering the Craft of Compelling Storytelling

"Tension is achieved when you have a goal, emotion, or ideal working in conflict." -- Margo Kelly

"The more intensely characters want something, and the more intense the resistance, the greater the conflict. And conflict is the most important ingredient for getting your audience to dream the fictive dream. At all times, you should have a motivated character overcoming obstacles in pursuit of a goal." -- James Frey, How to Write a Damn Good Thriller

"Micro-tension is that sense that, on every page of the novel, there’s conflict in the air, or that characters are slightly off-balance. It needn’t be a flat-out argument or a gun battle or a huge confrontation. …But small and continuous doses of tension keep the story moving and keep the pages turning." -- Tess Gerritsen


If you'd like me to speak with your group on this topic, send me an email at margokelly1 @ outlook . com (without the spaces).

Happy writing!



Monday, January 28, 2013

CONFLICT

I'm in the process of revising my WIP, and I thought I'd go back and look at some of my previous blog posts on the topic of revising.

I came across THIS POST about conflict in every chapter, and I considered reposting it because I found it helpful to reread the information. However, after reading the comments again on that post, I decided maybe we should discuss what CONFLICT means, instead.

To say that every chapter, every scene, every page needs to have conflict, does NOT mean it has to have a fight, an argument, a chase scene, or a high level of action. What it means is: there needs to be opposing ideas or emotions in every scene.

Ask yourself the questions from the PREVIOUS POST, but then really think: What is my character feeling at the beginning of this scene? What does she hope to accomplish? What's stopping her? And have your character struggle (internally and/or externally) to overcome those obstacles, and have the scene end with the character feeling the opposite from the beginning of the scene. This creates tension, page turning, and an exciting story.

Does every chapter of your WIP have conflict? Every scene? Every page? Do you think that's too much?

Wednesday, August 17, 2011

Character Development: EVIL vs. GOOD

So ... I had a great conversation last night after a business meeting, discussing the bare bones of leadership.

I've continued to think about the conversation throughout the night ... do you ever do that? Ponder things WHILE you sleep? Anyway, I digress.

Leadership ... you can go about it many different ways ... including the nice way and the mean way.

A book I've previously read on the topic:


This was an excellent book, based on excellent principles. A great way to be a positive leader.

But, last night, the book that was recommended to me was:

Here's what one reviewer on goodreads.com wrote:

"i learned to be eviiiilll with this book....haha actually this book made me realize how shady people can be. Plus how smart you and ambitious you should be about succeeding in life. You got to stand out in this world. If you roll with the bunches you'll become lost. You always have to have a good reputation or if you have a certain reputation you better use it to your advantage (damn im evil hahaha). This book will expose and teach you alot about the real world. One of my first books i really read and enjoyed. it motivated me to keeping learning about myself and people. i highly recommend it."

... okay ...

Which made me think: what a great basis for character development in your writing. There's a big difference between authentic leadership and pursuit of power.

Furthermore, what a great research tool for your writing! Read these books on leadership and power, and decide which book your character would prefer.

What do you think?

Do you think there's a difference between leadership and power? Have you read either book? 

Saturday, January 8, 2011

Be a GREAT Writer? Here's how:

Wanna be an amazing writer? Simple. Read these two blog posts:

Click Here
and/or
Click Here


Okay. Maybe not "simple" but the more we learn and practice, the closer we get... :-)

Do you have a favorite website that you read daily for writing inspiration?

Tuesday, January 4, 2011

CRAFT: Conflict

Conflict. What is it? If you have kids or a rocky marriage or a bipolar mother, the answer is clear.

Conflict is tension, stress, anxiety, and emotionally based.

My big A-HA moment regarding the craft of conflict came one day when I was reading one of my favorite blogs: writerunboxed.com

Now I promise, this week of CRAFT postings won't be just one big Donald Maass love-fest, but he does have really great writing advice. Here's the post that inspired me: The Elements of Awe Part II

In this post he writes:
"What does your protagonist believe beyond all else? Create a story event that forces him or her to accept the opposite."

A-HA!

Now, there's some conflict.

What is the best piece of advice you have for including conflict in your writing?