Showing posts with label WHO RU REALLY?. Show all posts
Showing posts with label WHO RU REALLY?. Show all posts

Monday, March 10, 2014

Win a Kindle Fire!

 

Welcome to the Pot of Gold Giveaway

Three winners will receive

 free glitter text and family website at FamilyLobby.com 



But in addition....



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will receive a 

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with 30 great books!  




It's an awesome giveaway. Go. Now. Enter.
 


Friday, March 7, 2014

DDYA: The Dark Side of Young Adults in Fiction and Real Life


Image courtesy of Stuart Miles / FreeDigitalPhotos.net

We all have it … a darker side. We may not admit to it in the light of day, but we all have that clichéd angel sitting on one shoulder and the devil sitting on the other. One is saying, “Make the right choice, and you’ll be glad in the end.” The other says, “Make the wrong choice, and you’ll have much more fun.” It’s that conflict that keeps us engaged and waffling with the decision at hand.
 
The same is true with a well written story. It’s conflict. 
 
If the main character always makes the right choice, then why bother to read the story? You already know what will happen. She’ll make the right choice, and everything will turn out fine in the end. But what if the main character makes the wrong choice and everything goes south from there? Will she realize her mistake sooner or later? What will she do to rectify the situation? How will she ever win in the end? This conflict is what keeps us turning the pages.
 
According to Mary Kole, author of WRITING IRRESISTIBLE KIDLIT, “Teens are exploring the dark side of their personalities around the time they hit fourteen or fifteen. They get interested in suicide and serial killers and other darker shades of humanity. Death-related worlds and characters help them explore that through fiction.”
 
That’s not saying authors should focus their plotlines on serial killers; it’s saying authors need to keep this aspect of the teen psyche in mind when developing characters and plot twists. Let the character explore these darker issues.
 
And it’s not just teens using fiction to explore dark elements; adults do it, too. 
 
According to James Frey, author of HOW TO WRITE A DAMN GOOD THRILLER, “Though we may be rooting for the hero, we have a secret fascination with the villain, who has a twin deep within our psyche.”
 
Writers have an incredible power to influence the thoughts of readers (if the story is written well, that is). Is it possible to explore the dark side without losing ourselves in it? Sure. As long as good wins out in the end, and writers have the power to make that happen.
 
Who is your favorite author that dips you into the darkness but brings you back out again?
 

Friday, February 7, 2014

Darkly Delcious YA



If you're not already following the Darkly Delicious Young Adult blog ... what are you waiting for?

Check out this behind-the-scenes post I wrote for the blog about creating book covers:
http://darklydeliciousya.blogspot.com/2014/02/dishing-secrets-about-margo-kellys-cover.html

What is one of your favorite book covers?

Have a great weekend!

Monday, December 9, 2013

Look What I Found!

My book (though coverless) is on Goodreads! YAY! Click on the link and check it out, and be sure to add it to your "Want to Read" list. :)

WHO RU REALLY? (on Goodreads!)

And ... thanks!

Here's a cupcake for your effort:


Friday, October 11, 2013

A Killer Title

I have read (and own) quite a few books on the craft of writing, but very few tackle the topic of creating a great title.

SAVE THE CAT by Blake Snyder dedicates a page and a half to the topic, which is more than the other books. ;)



Snyder writes, "to come up with one that nails the concept, without being so on the nose that it's stupid, is an art unto itself" (page 9).

Right ... we know that ... but how do we come up with that great title that nails the concept?

I dunno.

Evidence: My debut novel was originally titled THE EDUCATION OF THIA. After several agents used the phrase "too didactic" in their rejection letters, I reconsidered the title and changed it to BUT HE LOVES ME. With that change alone (I left the content of the query letter the same) I received quite a few requests for the full manuscript. So was it a winning title? Not really. After signing with an awesome agent, we worked and worked and worked to come up with a better title. We decided on SAFE. A winner? Not sure. The editor who made an offer on the manuscript said we had to change the title. Okay. Back to the drawing board.

Snyder also writes, "Title and logline are, in fact, the one-two punch, and a good combo never fails to knock me out. Like the irony in a good logline, a great title must have irony and tell the tale. One of the best titles of recent memory, and one I still marvel at, is Legally Blonde. ... It says what it is! ... If it doesn't pass the Say What It Is Test, you don't have your title. And you don't have the one-two punch" (pages 9-10).

So here is the logline my agent used to sell my manuscript:
Margo Kelly’s debut SAFE is a modern take on “the call is coming from inside the house” old urban legend, in which a young girl falls in love with a guy online who comes for her.

And here's the new title my editor and I came up with:
WHO RU REALLY?

Does it pass the Say What It Is Test? Or is it so "on the nose that its stupid?"

Actually, don't answer the second question.

Naming a book is like naming a child. Inevitably someone is going to hate the name, and you can't possibly please everyone.

*sigh*

BUT the good news is, I have a KILLER TITLE for my next book. ;)