Wednesday, July 28, 2010

Time to write a synopsis... BLECH!

I think in a perfect world, agents would simply want to read the entire manuscript - not a query - not a synopsis - but the MANUSCRIPT!

But, then in a perfect world, I would also get to be a size six  four, get to eat cake for breakfast, pizza for lunch, and ice cream for dinner.

Ahh... yes...

(pause for the daydream)

BUT NO - -

A query letter and synopsis are required if you want to entice an agent to read the whole story.

That's where I am today.

But, luckily for me, there are awesome bloggers who post tips to make my life easier. Check it out:

http://elanajohnson.blogspot.com/2010/07/how-to-write-synopsis.html

Thanks Elana, will you be my friend? Or maybe write my synopsis for me? At least?

Tuesday, July 27, 2010

Wanna read the first chapter?

Yesterday, I finished a revision of The Education of Thia. (YAY!)

I would LOVE to share the first chapter with you - - but I need your help first!  Help me get my Facebook "fans" up to 250 (currently 229), and I will post the first chapter for you to read. :-D

If you are not currently a FB fan, you can simply click below on the FB box in the lower right hand side of this blog.  Tell your friends! Help a gal out!

Thanks...
:-)
I hope you like the story...

Monday, July 26, 2010

Pillars of the Earth

Did you read "Pillars of the Earth" by Ken Follett? Did you like it?


I know people who LOVED it and people who HATED it. Not very many people had a middle of the road attitude about the book (at least not that I know personally!).

Now the book is a series on television!

Today, when I was supposed to be revising my WIP, I accidentally watched the first episode:

http://www.starz.com/originals/thepillarsoftheearth/screeningroom#/episode-101-anarchy/

Have you watched the series? What's your opinion? hahaha... (evil laugh, because I know what happens to the bad guy in the end...)

The book is always better than the movie/series/whatever.

Thursday, July 22, 2010

Is email going away?

As many of you know, my current work-in-progress is about a teenage girl who falls prey to an internet predator.

I was revising a chapter yesterday that dealt with the use of email, and I decided to put some research time into the process.  And... I found an interesting statistic.

Only 11% of teenagers use email on a daily basis.

click here to see more about the end of email

According to the above website, fastcompany.com: "If you want to know what people like us will do tomorrow, you look at what teenagers are doing today," Facebook COO Sheryl Sandberg told the audience at Nielsen's Consumer 360 conference. And according to Sandberg, only 11% of teens email daily--clearly, a huge generational drop. Instead, they are increasingly turning to SMS and social networks for communication. "E-mail--I can't imagine life without it--is probably going away," she said.

So... I put some serious thought into it, and I don't know if email will ever go away (fax machines are still around), but she's right about the teenagers. My teenagers don't check their email every day. They check Facebook and their cell phones. Hmm.

What do you think? Do you think email is going to disappear? Replaced by cell phone and social networks?

Tuesday, July 20, 2010

Creating Order from Chaos

Yesterday, I read an interesting article in the June issue of Woman's Day magazine.

Click here to read the article online.

One part of the article read, "One great way to give yourself a mood boost is to tackle an untidy area one step at a time. Get rid of some things you don't use (you probably don't need eight glass vases that came with floral arrangements). Chuck broken things" (Woman's Day, June 2010, page 16).

Then... I received a very helpful critique of the first chapter of The Education of Thia. (From my fabulous new critique partner Christi!!)

Click here to read a description of the story!

One part of the critique read, "I wonder why you use this? ... Clarify or dump it."

Ha. Perfect.

So, I plan to give myself a mood boost today and tackle one untidy area at a time. Ha. Chapter by chapter, line by line, word by word, I will tidy up my manuscript and make it the best thing ever! Well... besides chocolate and sex and love and ... okay, maybe I'll just make it the best possible story it can be!

Off to work.

But, first, let me know what chaotic thing in your life you plan to eliminate, or improve, today?

Saturday, July 17, 2010

Funny...

Uh, what happened to the last seven days? Blinked. And they were gone. Scary. Man. Scary.

But, here's a funny... check it out: http://slushpilehell.tumblr.com/page/1

Friday, July 9, 2010

Ping Pong

I was in a business class a few years ago where the instructor spoke of communicating with his son (using it to compare to employees and finding a way to motivate them). The instructor referred to his method of communication as ping pong.

He would ask his son a question. His son would give a general answer, and then the dad would ask, "And then what?" or "Why?" or "How come?" And the son would give another answer, and the dad would ask again, "And then what?" or "Why?" or "How come?" The dad would continue this method of ping-pong with his son until he really got to the meat of the situation.
I tried it in business with people I was attempting to motivate, to find the root of their "blocks" to success. It worked. It was weird, but cool.

So, then the other day, I read this great article in Writer's Digest (July/Aug 2010, page 70). The article was called "Upping the Ante" by Victoria Lynn Schmidt. The first sub-heading was "Identify Character Motivation."   The article goes on to discuss why your characters are doing what they're doing. And, it made me think of the ping-pong method.

So, I sat down with my main character, and I asked her, "What are you doing?" She answered. (I know, I'm a little crazy.) Then I asked her, "Why do you want to do that?" She answered. I asked, "So, why does that matter?" She answered. I asked, "How is that going to bring you pleasure?" "What difference is that going to make?" etc.

I learned some interesting things regarding my character's motivation.

Have a ping-pong conversation with your main character and see what happens.

Wednesday, July 7, 2010

My amazing critique partner...

Not only can she write - she can also sing! WOW! This video gave me serious chills. Just like when I read her scenes about LEO in her awesome book!! :) check out her blog, also:   http://www.melissaddean.com/

Maybe done?

"All who have meditated on the art of governing mankind have been convinced that the fate of empires depends on the education of youth." — Aristotle

I have just been blowing through my writing. It's felt so great! I think I may have finished my first draft this morning! It seems odd to me, because if you would've asked me two days ago, I would've told you I have a long way to go yet. But, then yesterday, my characters made unexpected choices and the story took an unexpected turn.  So, today, I just typed the last page!! OH MY GOSH!

So... I think I'll go eat a bagel.

And, then start at page one and do a little REVISING!